June 23, 2004
Daniel started reading my draft of Elaine’s Pearls
I was deeply complemented when he said that my characters were not like paperdolls and had character traits and qualities of there own. He also said that the story was very interesting. He couldn’t finish it as he had to be going somewhere else but hopefully he will finish it tonight. I’m glad he likes it. I heard a few laughs while he was reading it so apparently I did not completely leave out humor. I wasn’t focusing on it when I was writing.