January 24, 2004
Third edit posted…
I have been editing the story quite a bit. First I wrote the story and posted it, second I proofread it and fix some grammatical and typographical errors, now I just added paragraphs. I almost added them in unusual and confusing places, like mid sentence, to see if any body would notice but I decided to do what I did instead. And I hope every likes my story! I plan to write more stories like it but knowing myself as I do… It will be interesting to see what happens…